Original and tastefully executed! It's rare these days to encounter such pleasant and seemingly simple compositions...

I agree with Boris, it's original. An interesting portrait!

The face on the left is growing out of the wall (or growing into it) - a very unpleasant impression.

I have a bad impression of the lower part
I couldn't immediately figure out why the neck is so thick

I have a bad impression of the lower part
I couldn't figure out right away why the neck is so strong

ultimar, the chin-shoulder transition? It seems pretty good to me.

ultimar, the chin-to-shoulder transition? I don't think it's bad

Alexandr Ignatyev, the whole bottom: everything is so blended together that it's hard to tell which body part is which. Instead of a delicate neck, what sticks out isn't even a shoulder, but a strange stump.

I find the work interesting and enjoyable; it doesn't cause any unpleasant sensations. Although the two halves are proportional, there's a visual imbalance due to the large amount of white on the left. Cropping options are possible View crop View crop View crop, but I'm not sure how the author will view these improvements, or whether they are even necessary

Interesting! Unusual!