Well, what can I say... It's very conceptual. But... I understand that symmetry is part of the concept, but the horizon line, just below the hips, visually plumps the girl up, plus the awkwardly placed right arm, and then the horizon itself cuts her in half. Overall, I'd work on the composition some more. Oh, and also notice how the long red skirt seems to shorten the girl's height (the length of her legs). Maybe it needs more of it? Denis, no ulterior motives or malicious intent. It's just that here on HE people usually pick apart things, but overall, the work is vibrant and well-conceived... But we won't stop there, right?
Очень хорошая, техничная и эмоционально богатая работа. Не перестаю удивляться, как люди создают шедевры, не скатываясь в пошлятину и эпатаж. Очень понравилось светотональное решение, продуманность элементов декорирования (стул, фон), только одно little но - хотелось бы побольше лица. Нов любом случае - 9.