Good day. An interesting shot, but in my opinion, the model's head is too tense and not in its best position in the frame... and it hinders the work of the internal movement... It feels like the model is waiting for the sound of the camera shutter, wondering when he (the photographer) will finally take my picture... The model's pose in its construction suggests a certain fluidity, like water in a mountain stream... And if the model's head were thrown back even further (down), as much as possible, then everything would have happened... A certain sense of doom would appear in the frame, but most importantly, the internal movement will begin to work to its full extent... Let me remind you that such internal movement in the frame is a real sensation of the development of an artistic image in the space-time of an imaginary reality, in other words, invented by the author... Thank you.
Vladimir Ermolaev, hello, there's a grain of truth in your reasoning, and I have shots with a more thrown-back head that didn't pass the selection based on other parameters.
Only here there's no fluidity or relaxation; the body tenses slightly, lifts off the support, but doesn't arch completely, leaving the head and arms relaxed.
Thank you for your attention, comments, and thoughts.
Vladimir Ermolaev, hello, there's a grain of truth in your reasoning, and I have shots with a more thrown-back head that didn't pass the selection based on other parameters, but there's no fluidity or relaxation here; the body tenses slightly, lifts off the support, but doesn't arch completely, leaving the head and arms relaxed.
Thank you for your attention, your comments, and your thoughts.
Zan Zanzib, You are the author, and without a doubt, you are right. I am a viewer and was guided only by my own feelings and sensations. Thank you for the interesting shots.
Zan Zanzib, You are the author, and without a doubt, and for that reason, you are right. I am a viewer and was guided only by my own feelings and sensations... Thank you for the interesting photos.
and I have shots with a more thrown-back head that didn't pass the selection based on other parameters.
Only here there's no fluidity or relaxation; the body tenses slightly, lifts off the support,
but doesn't arch completely, leaving the head and arms relaxed.
Thank you for your attention, comments, and thoughts.