The lighting seems good, the girl looks great, and her hands are beautiful, but something's still off. I don't understand what...
Victor K. (NetHunter), It's not that the light rays are good, but the model's full face is in the dark, which is why it feels unfinished. Although the photo idea is wonderful!
The way the light falls... well, what can I say...
Or would it be better to remove it from the frame?